Film & TV Language: Sound video feedback and learner response.

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Original idea- sophisticated concept

Excellent cut to contrapuntal

Fast paced editing

Excellent find shot for parallel

Good choice of soundtrack, Kept to the brief : 1 min

Cutting between found footage.

Combination original and found footage + moving and still.

EBI

Abrupt ending, fade it our

Low resolution images

Sound levels, non diegetic / diegetic

www-I think my original clips along with the music created an effective demonstration of parallel sound. The contrapuntal sound was also effective as I portrayed the message that fighting can be used for good and bad through martial arts discipline and bullying and violence. I used a clever transition as I punch the screen and it transitions into a bully beating another child.

EBI- I could definitely fade out the sound at the end to give it a less abrupt finish. I could also use higher resolution photos for my fund pictures in the contrapuntal section. Also there is a watermark on a photo which could be removed.

I think Olivia's video was great in demonstrating sound. The editing of her videos was great and the music was fitting, similar to mine.

Raagni and Antonia's video was enjoyable as their original clips were fun and interesting. Like mine, its was fast paced and the original clips were fantastic. The music really matched the parallel section effectively contrasted the contrapuntal section.